Thursday, November 13, 2008

Essay 2 Outline 1

Outline:
I: There is no going back
-----A: "A new method of thinking hath arisen." Thomas Paine
----------1: The colonists now understand that breaking from Britian is the ----------only option they may have soon
---------2: Why fight against the inevitable?
-----B: "The cause is general and concerns a whole continent" NY -----Committee of 51
----------1: IT is time for the colonists to come together. To much has ----------happened to go back.
----------2: "No remedy can be of avail unless it proceeds from the joint ----------acts and approbiation of all."

II: America tried to go about this peacefully
-----A: "Our breast remain to tender a regard for the kingdom from -----which we derive our origin
----------1: They didnt want to not be British, they wanted to not be ----------oppressed.
-----B) Previous attempts were not taken into action
----------1) Petitions like the olive branch petition tried very hard to go ----------about this peacefully, and the king never even looked at this document

1 comment:

Craig McKenney said...

- The lack of complete sentences...and for that matter, context...makes this REALLY hard to follow.

- There is nothing that specifies this to your colony, nor does it specify an argument.

- (Parenthetic) citations...?